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Working from home, some think as beneficial and some people think as distract to family. Kindly provide your opinion?

Working from home, some think as beneficial and some people think as distract to family. Kindly provide your opinion? XGoMP

In this modern era, different job facilities are available to individual's based on their convenience, in which working from home is highlighted in front for the housewives. While some people believe this as hindrances for family it is outweighed with several advantageous factor and I agree with those factors. To start with, time reliability and flexibility are taken as first point for which most of the housewives are opting the work from home. Additionally, there will be financial support for family members in fulfilling their commitments or making household expenses. For instance, it is considered as must to have two income for the family to survive in this economy as the cost of all regular needs and groceries are high. Despite of the benefits, there might be problems of fake companies that utilize the services to provide work with initial deposits, which would be cheated at later stage. Moreover, at some uncertain time of relatives visits to home may be distracting to complete the work and also feel awkward in front of relatives. In my point of view, eventhough there are certain disadvantages it is must for the housewives to have certain second income to take care of the family and to make herself feel secured.

In this modern era, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 job facilities are available to Consider using the plural form here: "individuals".individuals
individual's
 based on their convenience, in which working from home is highlighted
The usual preposition for "in front" is "of". Did you mean "in front of"?in front of
in front for
 the housewives. While This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 believe this as hindrances for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 it is outweighed
 with several advantageous factor and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with those factors.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with, time reliability and flexibility are taken
 as first
 point for which most of the housewives are opting the work from home. Additionally
, there will be financial support for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 members in fulfilling their commitments or making household expenses. For instance
, it is considered
 as After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use "must" or "have to" here.musthave to
must to
 have two income for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 to survive in this economy as the cost of all regular needs and groceries are high.

Did you mean "Despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?Despite
Despite of
 the benefits, there might be problems of fake This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 that utilize the services to provide work with initial deposits, which would be cheated
 at later stage. Moreover
, at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 uncertain time of relatives visits to home may be distracting to complete the work and also
 feel awkward in front of relatives.

In my point of view, Possible spelling mistake found.even though
eventhough
 there are certain disadvantages it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 for the housewives to have certain second income to take care of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 herself feel secured. 