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Women are bad persons, are you agree or disagree, some people think like that

Women are bad persons, are you agree or disagree, some people think like that LaJ1
I am woman, I am beautiful and I think that i am better than others but others think that I am not. What do you think about it. Well, it is quite difficult topic for writing but i am trying to develop my answer now. If we talk about women, they are humans that think million times and do one time. I think it is very good. On the other hand they are agressive people, sometimes. . Hehjdidiendieorbfiornfjrow ieowndudibeifbeiwkejd ieowndudownduodendie9 id9ebwi1pnebdodbriroe dieoebeieownsuepwne dieowndhie bdoe die die ie doeowneurpwokqpqns dioemqkdheiepnehdid owowbdieownsbdipwnebdbeoeneu jsowoebudoeheiepwjd eowowoejbd eid db ebe eje ej ebe ej ebeene dj eneebe dnww sq w q a qwnw e r tbr r 4br r n4 r tn4 t yopdpock i o io ioi ghipp lp p p o pp nuiphg ooo hh ioiggio h hu oo jj669 9 h v j o oo o
I am woman, I am
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am better than others
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others
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that I am not. What do you
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about it. Well, it is quite difficult topic for writing
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but
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i
am trying to develop my answer
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. If we talk about women, they are humans that
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times and do one time. I
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agressive
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people
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sometimes
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IELTS essay Women are bad persons, are you agree or disagree, some people think like that

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
143 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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