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Woman's conditions in the world

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Despite wemon are becoming a significant part of the society, we still behold some inequalities hence, we are still some way from obtaining gender equity. Statistics demonstrate that one fifth of the improvements caused by women's cooperation. In the past men considered rational and women were delicate therefore, they hardly ever received a position in the government but nowadays loads of things altert and they recruit in companies and received position in the government. Nevertheless they are attaining some prestigious position in the government, if we look carefully we see that major fallacies still exist. It can be because of several factors the most vital ones are ‏ prejudice and superstition. Men are envious creatures and the have never let women get interfering in some specific activities Consequently, l reckon if we let women to enhance their conditions in the world, we will observe improvements.

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 that major fallacies still
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, l reckon if we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
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 women to enhance their conditions in the world, we will observe improvements. 