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Children learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Publishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction

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IELTS essay Children learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Publishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction

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American English

3 paragraphs

129 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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