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To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement: “Everyone should adopt vegetarian diet or eat less meat because eating meat has great impact on climate change”

with this statement: “Everyone should adopt vegetarian diet or eat less meat because eating meat has great impact on climate change” Bw7GV
A vegetarian diet is one that includes only plants and plant-based products such as vegetables, grains, nuts, and fruits. It excludes any animal flesh or animal product such as meat, fish, eggs, dairy products. Vegetarians may also abstain from eating byproducts of animal slaughter such as gelatin, dairy products. Many people are either vegetarian or vegan today due to various reasons including religious beliefs, ethical beliefs etc. Vegetarianism can be traced back to ancient times. The more you know about the animals you are eating the more likely you are not to eat them because there are many animals that live in cruel conditions before they are killed for food. The methods of killing them are also often brutal methods of torture which include suffocation with carbon dioxide gas or electric shocks to make — I agree with the statement to a certain extent. I understand that meat is tasty and it can be hard to give up after tasting it. But, on the other hand, I am worried about my health and whether or not meat is healthy for me. I think people should make their own decisions when it comes to food. If they are worried about their health, animal welfare, or climate change then they should probably stop eating meat. But if they are not worried about any of these things then I think that they should eat what they want to eat. — The production of meat is an inefficient use of resources, and eating meat has great impact on climate change. Eating less meat will help the environment in the long run. Despite all these consequences, people are still eating more animal products. And, it is not just because they enjoy the taste of meat. It is actually because they want to get protein from animal products because many people don’t get enough protein in their diet. However, there are many other sources for getting this necessary nutrient - lentils, beans, tofu are all good plant-based sources for protein.
A vegetarian diet is one that includes
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only
plants and plant-based
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products
such as vegetables, grains, nuts, and fruits. It excludes any
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animal
flesh or
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animal
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product
such as
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meat
, fish, eggs, dairy
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products
. Vegetarians may
also
abstain from
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eating
byproducts of
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animal
slaughter such as gelatin, dairy products.

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Many
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people
are either vegetarian or vegan
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today
due to various reasons including religious beliefs, ethical beliefs etc. Vegetarianism can
be traced
back to ancient times.

The more you know about the
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animals
you are
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eating
the more likely you are not to eat them
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because
there are
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many
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animals
that
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live
in cruel conditions
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before
they
are killed
for food. The methods of killing them are
also
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often
brutal methods of torture which include suffocation with carbon dioxide gas or electric shocks to
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I
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agree
with the statement to a certain extent. I understand that
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meat
is tasty and it can be
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hard
to give up after tasting it.
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,
on the other hand
, I
am worried
about my health and
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whether or not
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meat
is healthy for me.

I
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think
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people
should
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make
their
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own
decisions when it
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comes
to food. If they
are worried
about their health,
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animal
welfare, or climate
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change
then they should
probably
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stop
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eating
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meat
.
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But
if they are not worried about any of these things then I
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think
that they should eat what they want to eat.

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The production of
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meat
is an inefficient
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use
of resources, and
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eating
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meat
has great impact on climate
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change
.
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Eating
less
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meat
will
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help
the environment in the long run.

Despite all these consequences,
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people
are
still
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eating
more
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animal
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products
. And, it is not
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just
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because
they enjoy the taste of
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meat
. It is actually
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because
they want to
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get
protein from
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animal
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products
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because
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many
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people
don’t
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get
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enough
protein in their diet.
However
, there are
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many
other sources for getting this necessary nutrient
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lentils, beans, tofu are all
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good
plant-based sources for protein.
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IELTS essay with this statement: “Everyone should adopt vegetarian diet or eat less meat because eating meat has great impact on climate change”

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
334 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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