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with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. yqpJ
In today's techonological world, with the blessings of it, we are able to evoluate us. It is often believed that prolifertaing numbers of electronic books, the usages of printed books is at the edge of extinction. Some said that it is good step towards new future while others denied it. There are some fruitful outcomes as well as detrimental effects. both of these segments are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs. The former one benefit from it is that we can easily read something without a printed material; at any time and any place. It is esay way to know something and read something in our lesuire time. Furthermore, we cannot purchase any e-books owing to we find it in our online platform with the help of internet. For instance, in the recent survey of sibiria, they declared that 45% of their population use e-books in lieu of other sites due to their numourous advantages. However, there are aslo some negative side which we cannot overlook. To embark with, the first and foremost one disadvantage is that it affects our eyesight. Pro-longed use of it affects our cornia extremely badly and we have to suffer from eye disorders and also at the less age of our face we have spectacles. Addition to this, some people have habit to read paper books and magazines especially elders one. Consequently, they cannot use it in proper way. To recapitulate, there are both boons and banes as we know that no rose without throns, their negative side also appear with it. Contrarily, overall because of techno-savvy world, e-books are used by people nowadays.
In
today
's
techonological
world, with the blessings of it, we are able to
evoluate
us. It is
often
believed that
prolifertaing
numbers of electronic books, the usages of printed books is at the edge of extinction.
Some
said that it is
good
step towards new future while others denied it. There are
some
fruitful outcomes
as well
as detrimental effects.
both
of these segments
are elaborated
in the ensuing paragraphs.

The former one benefit from it is that we can
easily
read something without a printed material; at any time and any place. It is
esay
way to know something and read something in our
lesuire
time.
Furthermore
, we cannot
purchase
any e-books owing to we find it in our online platform with the
help
of internet.
For instance
, in the recent survey of
sibiria
, they declared that 45% of their population
use
e-books in lieu of other sites due to their
numourous
advantages.

However
, there are
aslo
some
negative
side which we cannot overlook. To embark with, the
first
and foremost one disadvantage is that it affects our eyesight. Pro-longed
use
of it affects our
cornia
extremely
badly and
we
have to
suffer from eye disorders and
also
at the less age of our face we have spectacles. Addition to this,
some
people
have habit to read paper books and magazines
especially
elders one.
Consequently
, they cannot
use
it in proper way.

To recapitulate, there are both boons and banes as we know that no rose without
throns
, their
negative
side
also
appear with it.
Contrarily
,
overall
because
of techno-savvy world, e-books are
used
by
people
nowadays.
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IELTS essay with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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