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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper book. Some people see this as a good step forward while other do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trends?

With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper book. Some people see this as a good step forward while other do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trends? 67EW
Rise of e-books have a increased popularity during last years. People thinks its a stepping stone for the future and some people thinks old habits will never die when the topic is about books. This essay will give an idea about the advantages an disadvantages about this topic. The necessity of our age is mobility. People who needs to travel or going far distances everyday needs lighter baggage. For example if an acamedic professor needs to travel a lot for his conferences or research, he will eventually looking for a easy solution. The books will be very heavy, especially if they are academic books, it will gonna make problem for the professor during his international flights economicly and space. On the other hand waiting for the shipment can cause problem. If someone needs to access some book anywhere around the world. It will be easy for him to store a digital copy with in his telephone or ebook reader. Even if there are multiple advantages couple of disadvantages can be found. One of them is reading book needs a lot of attention and requaires lots of hours. During this time looking at a screen can be harmful for eyes and cause eye diseases. Also books can pass information through centuries. We can saw handwritten books preserved in museums written in ages ago. It is not possible for the e-books. Because of the electronic devices can break easily, it can not preserve the books for many long. In conclusion, rising of e-books has many advantages and these advantages are due to keeping up with the present. Although the advantages outweigh, people who are distant will also keep pace over time.
Rise of e-books have
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a stepping stone for the future and
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people
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thinks
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old
habits will never
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when the topic is about
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books
. This essay will give an
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idea
about the
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advantages
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The necessity of our age is mobility.
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who
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needs
to travel or going far distances everyday
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lighter baggage.
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if an
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acamedic
professor
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needs
to travel a lot for his conferences or research, he will
eventually
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for
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a
easy solution. The
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books
will be
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very
heavy,
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if they are academic
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books
, it will
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problem for the professor during his international flights
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economicly
and space.
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waiting for the shipment can cause problem.
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someone
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needs
to access
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some
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book
anywhere around the world. It will be easy for him to store a digital copy with in his telephone or
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ebook
reader.

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there are multiple
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advantages
couple of disadvantages can
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. One of them is reading
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book
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needs
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a lot of
attention and
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lots of hours. During this time looking at a screen can be harmful for eyes and cause eye diseases.
Also
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books
can pass information through centuries. We can
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saw
handwritten
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books
preserved in museums written in ages ago. It is not possible for the e-books.
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Because
of the electronic devices can break
easily
, it can not preserve the
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books
for
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many
long.

In conclusion
, rising of e-books has
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advantages
and these
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advantages
are due to keeping up with the present. Although the
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advantages
outweigh,
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people
who are distant will
also
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keep
pace over time.
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IELTS essay With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper book. Some people see this as a good step forward while other do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trends?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
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