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In this present era, a numbers of new cooperation are started. Few people believe the main factor of that cooperation is protecting the environment, whereas others do not support that statement. They feel the main benefit of international cooperation is the world business. This essay will explain both expect and also give my opinion. That described in the following paragraphs. To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons which indicated cooperation is for saving nature. First and foremost, some countries made a committee and start some movement such as “no plastic use”. That reduces the amount of soil pollution. In addition, international NGO like WHO makes one day an environmental day, in which local authorities plant a tree. For example, more than 8000 trees were planted in last year's environmental day in India, which was written by one newspaper. Those are things that push people to think cooperations are useful for nature. On the other hand, there are numbers of things which sa

In this present era, a numbers of new cooperation are started. Few people believe the main factor of that cooperation is protecting the environment, whereas others do not support that statement. They feel the main benefit of international cooperation is the world business. This essay will explain both expect and also give my opinion. That described in the following paragraphs. To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons which indicated cooperation is for saving nature. First and foremost, some countries made a committee and start some movement such as “no plastic use”. That reduces the amount of soil pollution. In addition, international NGO like WHO makes one day an environmental day, in which local authorities plant a tree. For example, more than 8000 trees were planted in last year's environmental day in India, which was written by one newspaper. Those are things that push people to think cooperations are useful for nature. On the other hand, there are numbers of things which sa LyQ6
In this present era, a numbers of new cooperation are started. Few people believe the main factor of that cooperation is protecting the environment, whereas others do not support that statement. They feel the main benefit of international cooperation is the world business. This essay will explain both expect and also give my opinion. That described in the following paragraphs. To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons which indicated cooperation is for saving nature. First and foremost, some countries made a committee and start some movement such as “no plastic use”. That reduces the amount of soil pollution. In addition, international NGO like WHO makes one day an environmental day, in which local authorities plant a tree. For example, more than 8000 trees were planted in last year's environmental day in India, which was written by one newspaper. Those are things that push people to think cooperations are useful for nature. On the other hand, there are numbers of things which say corporation helps to expand businesses. Firstly, international cooperation provides a market all around the world, which will help to sale maximum products. secondly, because of the international market, the demand for any products increase. That will create a huge amount of profit for any industries. For instance, since India started to export some products then that products industries income drastically rose. That was explained by one survey of the University of Gujarat in 2018. To conclude, although international cooperation is beneficial for the environment, that is more useful for world business than the environment. In my opinion, the international committees are helpful to improve businesses and it’s profit too.
In this present era,
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a numbers
of new
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cooperation
are
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started
. Few
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people
believe the main factor of that
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cooperation
is protecting the environment, whereas others do not support that statement. They feel the main benefit of
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international
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cooperation
is the world
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business
. This essay will
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explain
both
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expect
and
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give my opinion. That
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described
in the following paragraphs.

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plenty
of reasons which indicated
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cooperation
is for saving nature.
First
and foremost,
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some
countries made a committee and
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start
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some
movement such as “no plastic
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use
”. That
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reduces
the amount of soil pollution.
In addition
,
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international
NGO like WHO
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makes
one day an environmental day, in which local authorities plant a tree.
For example
, more than 8000 trees
were planted
in last year's environmental day in India, which
was written
by one newspaper. Those are things that push
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people
to
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think
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cooperations
are useful for nature.

On the other hand
, there are numbers of things which say corporation
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helps
to expand
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businesses
.
Firstly
,
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international
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cooperation
provides a market all around the world, which will
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help
to sale maximum
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products
.
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secondly
,
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because
of the
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international
market, the demand for any
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products
increase. That will create a huge amount of profit for any industries.
For instance
, since India
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started
to export
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some
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products
then that
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products
industries income
drastically
rose. That was
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explained
by one survey of the University of Gujarat in 2018.

To conclude
, although
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international
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cooperation
is beneficial for the environment,
that is
more useful for world
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business
than the environment. In my opinion, the
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international
committees are helpful to
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improve
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businesses
and it’s profit too.
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IELTS essay In this present era, a numbers of new cooperation are started. Few people believe the main factor of that cooperation is protecting the environment, whereas others do not support that statement. They feel the main benefit of international cooperation is the world business. This essay will explain both expect and also give my opinion. That described in the following paragraphs. To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons which indicated cooperation is for saving nature. First and foremost, some countries made a committee and start some movement such as “no plastic use”. That reduces the amount of soil pollution. In addition, international NGO like WHO makes one day an environmental day, in which local authorities plant a tree. For example, more than 8000 trees were planted in last year's environmental day in India, which was written by one newspaper. Those are things that push people to think cooperations are useful for nature. On the other hand, there are numbers of things which sa

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