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With the latest technological advancements, dating is now possible online. Would you recommend online dating for your single friends? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online dating? Site some examples to support your answer. v.3

With the latest technological advancements, dating is now possible online. Would you recommend online dating for your single friends? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online dating? Site some examples to support your answer. v. 3
Nowadays, online dating is thought to be increasingly popular. Generally speaking, single people tend to prefer finding friends through social networks. In my opinion, despite some advantages, online dating is not a proper way of making friends. Let’s start by looking at the advantages of online dating. One of its main positives is that online communication could be easier, more accessible and also time saver, especially for introverted people. It is believed that through social webs, you have the chance to observe different people in various situations, so even though sometimes you may get fake information, it would help you to find the right person as a friend. In addition, you do not have to waste your time on face-to-face appointments. On the whole, assuming true information, I suggest online dating to my alone friends. Turning to the other side of the argument, it might be difficult to trust the data you receive from the virtual world. For example, you may have been given some wrong pieces of information such as age, level of education, family, and so on. Therefore, you cannot safely rely on whatever you hear. Unfortunately, in some cases, emotional people might be cheated by tricky online users. Besides, being in touch with various fake online friends for a long time would cause pessimism, a feeling of failure, or in extreme cases, depression. Finally, in order not to gain bitter experiences, you had better keep away from online dating. Another major drawback is that, when you get used to online friendships, it can have negative effects on your social behavior. What I mean by this is that it would become more difficult for you to communicate with people in the real world. Furthermore, overusing online chat rooms is addictive, and also after a while, it may cause physical problems like backache, headache, or ocular diseases. To some up, finding friends in the real world tends to be safer and more valuable for single people. In conclusion, although online dating is turning to a more common way of making friends in the world, damages of virtual life are undeniable. In other words, the disadvantages of online dating outweigh its advantages.
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to be
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popular.
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people
tend to prefer finding
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friends
through social networks. In my opinion, despite
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some
advantages,
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online
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dating
is not a proper way of making friends.

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Let
’s
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start
by looking at the advantages of
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online
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dating
. One of its main positives is that
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online
communication could be easier, more accessible and
also
time saver,
especially
for introverted
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people
. It
is believed
that through social webs, you have the chance to observe
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different
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people
in various situations,
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sometimes
you may
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get
fake information, it would
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the right person as a
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.
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, you do not
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On the whole
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to my alone friends.

Turning to the other side of the argument, it might be difficult to trust the data you receive from the virtual
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world
.
For example
, you may have been
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some
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pieces of information such as age, level of education, family, and
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on.
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, you cannot
safely
rely on whatever you hear. Unfortunately, in
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some
cases, emotional
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people
might
be cheated
by tricky
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online
users.
Besides
, being in touch with various fake
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online
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friends
for a long time would cause pessimism, a feeling of failure, or in extreme cases, depression.
Finally
, in order not to gain bitter experiences, you had better
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keep
away from
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online
dating.

Another major drawback is that, when you
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friendships, it can have
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negative
effects on your social behavior. What I mean by this is that it would become more difficult for you to communicate with
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people
in the real
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world
.
Furthermore
, overusing
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online
chat rooms is addictive, and
also
after a while, it may cause physical problems like backache, headache, or ocular diseases. To
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some
up, finding
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friends
in the real
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world
tends to be safer and more valuable for single
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people
.

In conclusion
, although
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online
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dating
is turning to a more common way of making
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friends
in the
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world
, damages of virtual life are undeniable.
In other words
, the disadvantages of
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online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dating
outweigh its advantages.
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32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay With the latest technological advancements, dating is now possible online. Would you recommend online dating for your single friends? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online dating? Site some examples to support your answer. v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
362 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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