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With recent developments in technology like e-books,some people feel that printed media like books, newspaper and magazines will soon be a thing of the past others feel that these forms of media will never disappear what is your opinion? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples knowledge or experience

With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspaper and magazines will soon be a thing of the past others feel that these forms of media will never disappear what is your opinion? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples knowledge or experience pYd3
Technology makes everyone’s life very easy. In particular few group of readers believe that physical material of reading will not exit in next generation while others have strong consist it will never disappear. There are some reasons justify my opinion in below paragraphs. There are many forms of physical medias available in maker likewise, books newspaper and magazines. All don’t require electricity or any connection for use. It also easy to carry while you are travelling. Physical things give different feeling while people keeps with them. In addition these things available at very cheap cost. Mostly people belong to 90’s. They are used to with physical material. Printed media is one kind of proof. It can be useful in future for evidence also On the other hand new generation like digital media. Where everything’s available on screen. Nothing exist physically moreover there are hundreds of books available in only one gadget. Sometime people do not have time to read books so they prefer audio book. Meanwhile they will multitasking due to bless of technology everything available on finger tips. Personally my opinion is regarding these two kind of media I like physical media because printed media give me personal attachment and it is handy for me. Top of it printed media is easy to acess it does not require any more knowledge or skill for access. Conclusion most ideal things nowadays are digital media most of depend of technology and like to smart phones and laptops they are going like emails e-newspaper and e-magazines in next ten years.
Technology
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makes
everyone’s life
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very
easy.
In particular
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few group
of readers
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believe
that
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physical
material of reading will not exit in
next
generation while others have strong consist it will never disappear. There are
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some
reasons justify my opinion in below paragraphs.

There are
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many
forms of
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physical
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medias
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available
in maker
likewise
,
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books
newspaper and magazines. All don’t require electricity or any connection for
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use
.
It seems that a verb is missing.
It
also
easy to carry while you are travelling.
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Physical
things give
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different
feeling while
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people
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keeps
with them. In
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addition
these things
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available
at
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very
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cheap
cost.
Mostly
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people
belong to
Apostrophes aren't needed for decades: "90s".
90’s
. They are
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used
to with
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physical
material. Printed
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media
is one kind of proof. It can be useful in future for evidence
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also


On the other hand
new generation like digital
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media
.
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Where
everything’s
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available
on screen. Nothing exist
physically
moreover
there are hundreds of
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books
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available
in
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only
one gadget. Sometime
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people
do not have time to read
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books
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so
they prefer audio
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book
.
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Meanwhile
they
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will multitasking
due to bless of technology everything
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available
on finger tips.

Personally
my opinion is regarding these two kind of
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media
I like
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physical
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media
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because
printed
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media
give me personal attachment and it is handy for me. Top of it printed
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media
is easy to
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acess it
does not require any more knowledge or
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skill
for access.

Conclusion most ideal things nowadays are digital
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media
most of
The verb 'to depend' requires the preposition '(up)on': "depend on".
depend
of technology and like to smart phones and laptops they are going like emails e-newspaper and e-magazines in
next
ten years.
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IELTS essay With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspaper and magazines will soon be a thing of the past others feel that these forms of media will never disappear what is your opinion? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples knowledge or experience

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  American English
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