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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. WQWb
Recycling has become a larger phenomenon over the course of the twenty first century. There is a large amount of people who think that making recycling a legal requirement is the sole way to increase recycling. This essay will discuss why more laws are required to force people to recycle more of their waste. More laws to control the disposal of waste from home are essential because most people are obviously not willing to recycle by themselves and will continue to do what is easier, not recycling is always an easier option that discarding all into one bin, whereas if there were laws in place, they would be more enthused to participate. Even though it was proven far before that seatbelts saved lives it needed the creation of laws to make people put use them, therefore reducing the number of casualties on the road. Decidedly people should not be trusted to do the right thing when there is an easier option. As talked about above the lack of motivation to recycle is causing ever increasing problems. Although some government rules are in place to incite people to recycle, they are not working adequately. Unless rules change, we will have an unsustainable amount of waste. For example, there already exist in the world there exists locations like garbage island where the waste products of the world accumulate while being ignored by governments. Due to situations such as stated previously the need for change is now. To conclude more laws are required to control the disposal of waste as the current cycle of events cannot be allowed to continue.
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Recycling
has become a larger phenomenon over the course of the twenty
first
century. There is a large amount of
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people
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that making
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recycling
a legal requirement is the sole way to increase
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recycling
. This essay will discuss why more
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laws
are required
to force
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people
to
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recycle
more of their waste.

More
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laws
to control the disposal of
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waste
from home are essential
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because
most
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people
are
obviously
not willing to
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recycle
by themselves and will continue to do what is easier, not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
is always an easier option that discarding all into one bin, whereas if there were
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laws
in place, they would be more enthused to participate.
Even though
it
was proven
far
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before
that seatbelts saved
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lives
it needed the creation of
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laws
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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people
put
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use
them,
therefore
reducing the number of casualties on the road.
Decidedly
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people
should not
be trusted
to do the right thing when there is an easier option.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
talked about above the lack of motivation to
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recycle
is causing
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
ever increasing
problems. Although
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some
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government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
are in place to incite
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people
to
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recycle
, they are not working
adequately
. Unless
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rules
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
, we will have an unsustainable amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
.
For example
, there already exist in the world there exists locations like garbage island where the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
products of the world accumulate while being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignored
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
. Due to situations such as stated previously the need for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.

To conclude
more
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laws
are required
to control the disposal of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
cycle of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
cannot be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to continue.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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