Many developing and developed countries are spending huge amounts of money on space exploration. They are keenly interested in finding out the existence of life on galaxies and stars. This is a lengthy process, which required huge funds and time. People argue that space exploration is a waste of time and money. This amount should be spent on other problems. I believe that helping and improving living standard of poor nations is the best way to use the money.
Rich nations play a pivotal role in bringing change and prosperity for poor nations. Developing countries such as Africa, Syria etc. have serious problems in health, education and employment sectors. That could only be solved with the help of developed nations. Many countries are giving financial aids and others are investing directly in order to solve and mitigate the woes of peoples and received respect and gratitude in this regard.
However, discovering unresolved mysteries is a real challenge for the scientist. Many countries are funding research centres to unfold hidden mysteries of the world. This is time consuming and lengthy work. Scientists are in search of natural resources that are less in quantity on earth. Their success could substantially change the world and will open a new horizon of success.
To conclude, I believe that it is an ethical and moral responsibility of nations to eradicate problems in their neighbouring countries. Meanwhile, research on space exploration should be continued until we get desired results. It is a time-consuming process but it will leave undeniable benefits on people lives in case of success.
Many
developing and developed
countries
are spending huge amounts of money on space exploration. They are
keenly
interested in finding out the existence of life on galaxies and stars. This is a lengthy process, which required huge funds and time.
People
argue that space exploration is a waste of time and money. This amount should
be spent
on other problems. I believe that helping and improving living standard of poor
nations
is the best way to
use
the money.
Rich
nations
play a pivotal role in bringing
change
and prosperity for poor
nations
. Developing
countries
such as Africa, Syria etc. have serious problems in health, education and employment sectors. That could
only
be solved
with the
help
of developed
nations
.
Many
countries
are giving financial aids
and others
are investing
directly
in order to solve and mitigate the woes of peoples and received respect and gratitude in this regard.
However
, discovering unresolved mysteries is a real challenge for the scientist.
Many
countries
are funding research
centres
to unfold hidden mysteries of the world. This is
time consuming
and lengthy work. Scientists are in search of natural resources that are less in quantity on earth. Their success could
substantially
change
the world and will open a new horizon of success.
To conclude
, I believe that it is an ethical and moral responsibility of
nations
to eradicate problems in their
neighbouring
countries
. Meanwhile, research on space exploration should
be continued
until we
get
desired results. It is a time-consuming process
but
it will
leave
undeniable benefits on
people
lives
in case of success.
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