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Should we participate in social activities?

Should we participate in social activities? Bw9oV

It is true that participating in some social activities has played an important role in people's life. Therefore, I believe that each citizen in the world should take part in social activities because those activities are good for their mental and physical health. To begin with, having good mental health is very essential for the global residents, especially the old and lonely people. If they don't take part in social activities, they can be stressed and introvert. For instance, my classmate, who is always at home and plays games online, is very shy and always scared of strangers.

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 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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 for their mental and physical health.

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 mental health is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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. If they don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
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 and introvert. For instance
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 shy and always scared of strangers. 