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wind turbines and their locations

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In the few past decade using renewable energy is going important for governments since the amount of fossil fuel being reduce and for climate changing. One of those pure energies is wind turbines which is giant fiberglass or wood blades on a large steel tower at windy part of country like up of the hills or in a coast. Windy turbines have wind sensor that turn the blades to a right speed and direction wind then by pass wind through them generator store electricity. There are optimum locations to wind turbines such as beaches which landscape not very spoiled or little domestic turbines which produce up 100 kilo watts electricity and finally huge wind turbines on hills or mountain which their blades turn with maximum wind strengths, so they can make electricity for small town. Spite costs that these turbines have, but they can produce the power that inhabitant at sea cities or windy part of country need.
In the few past decade using renewable energy is going
important
for
governments
since the amount of fossil fuel being
reduce
and for climate changing.

One of those pure energies is
wind
turbines
which is giant fiberglass or wood blades on a large steel tower at windy part of country like up of the hills or in a coast.

Windy
turbines
have
wind
sensor that turn the blades to a right speed and direction
wind
then by pass
wind
through them generator store electricity.

There are optimum locations to
wind
turbines
such as beaches which landscape not
very
spoiled or
little
domestic
turbines
which produce up 100 kilo watts electricity and
finally
huge
wind
turbines
on hills or mountain which their blades turn with maximum
wind
strengths,
so
they can
make
electricity for
small
town.

Spite costs that these
turbines
have,
but
they can produce the power that inhabitant at sea cities or windy part of country need.
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IELTS essay wind turbines and their locations

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