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Why do people like travelling these days

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There is an increasing number of people going travelling and visiting different places these days, and this may be caused by three important reasons. Firstly, many of them want to learn more about the world during their trip. It is very nice to visit many breathtaking destinations and enjoy various cuisines from many countries around the world. Travelling gives us a chance to meet residents, as well as learn new languages so that we can broaden our horizons about their culture and behaviours. Additionally, some people tend to have holidays with their families to create unforgettable memories. Normally, family members are very busy with their schedule, they don’t often see each other, so travelling is a special way to bring members closer to each other. As a result, there is no generation gap between younger and older age groups. Finally, more and more young teenagers spend a gap year on vacation to get away from the busy life. Travelling allows us to live the life we love, we may forget about our jobs, our classes, our current problems and do anything we cherish. Through the experiences we gain from the journey, we can discover our strengths, and improve our weaknesses. In conclusion, travelling is very significant, we should take advantage of our freedom to learn more about ourselves.
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places these days, and this may
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of them want to learn more about the world during their trip. It is
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nice to visit
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breathtaking destinations and enjoy various cuisines from
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countries around the world.
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gives us a chance to
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meet
residents,
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as learn new languages
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that we can broaden our horizons about their culture and
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tend to have holidays with their families to create unforgettable memories.
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busy with their schedule, they don’t
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each other,
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is a special way to bring members closer to each other.
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, there is no generation gap between younger and older age groups.
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, more and more young
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spend a gap year on vacation to
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away from the busy life.
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allows
us to
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the life we
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, we may forget about our jobs, our classes, our
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problems and do anything we cherish. Through the experiences we gain from the journey, we can discover our strengths, and
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our weaknesses.
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is
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significant, we should take advantage of our freedom to learn more about ourselves.
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IELTS essay Why do people like travelling these days

Essay
  American English
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218 words
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