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Why young men like eating fast food

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In recent decades, fast food has played a vital role in our modern society due to the need for convenience and more affordable meals in the metropolises. It is also said that numerous male teenagers prefer consuming junk food for their breakfast, lunch or even dinner. This problem is caused by many different reasons which will be discussed in this essay. The first explanation that is worth mentioning is time-saving. Nowadays, consumers tend to spend more money on deep-fried food such as French fries, chicken wings, etc. instead of homemade food or organic vegetables, because most of them do not have enough time to prepare for a whole meal at home or some do not have a knack for cooking, so the idea of buying instant food at local stores such as KFC, Lotteria or street food obviously saves them a decent amount of time. Moreover, quick-service restaurants offer a wide range of choices beyond typical hamburgers or pizzas, therefore, choosing your favorite dish on the menu is not a big deal. So that the young people can change the food that they have daily without spending a ton of time on shopping for the ingredients and it also helps them to cut back the cooking time requirements in half. Another reason for the preference of consuming fast food is the accessibility. As the above-mentioned explanation, junk food is not only convenient but also easy to can be consumed no matter where you are or where you go. Recently, there are a lot of options available for fast food buyers, for instance, they can sit in the store to eat what they have bought, or you can order takeout food online. What is more, in some countries like USA or even in Vietnam, fast-food restaurants like McDonald’s provide the drive-thru option, where you can buy food the at the drive-thru window and eat it right in your car. Thus, a quick meal like that is suitable for those who have a hectic schedule at work or school whether they are young or mature. In conclusion, it is hard to deny that so many young men love eating fast food because of its convenience. However, junk food should not be consumed day by day.
In recent decades,
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food
has played a vital role in our modern society due to the need for convenience and more affordable meals in the metropolises. It is
also
said that numerous male
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teenagers
prefer consuming junk
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food
for their breakfast, lunch or even dinner. This problem
is caused
by
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many
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different
reasons which will
be discussed
in this essay.

The
first
explanation
that is
worth mentioning is time-saving. Nowadays, consumers tend to spend more money on deep-fried
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food
such as French fries, chicken wings, etc.
instead
of homemade
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food
or organic vegetables,
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because
most of them do not have
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enough
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time
to prepare for a whole meal at home or
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some
do not have a knack for cooking,
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so
the
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idea
of buying instant
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food
at local stores such as KFC,
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Lotteria
or street
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food
obviously
saves them a decent amount of
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time
.
Moreover
, quick-service restaurants offer a wide range of choices beyond typical hamburgers or pizzas,
therefore
, choosing your favorite dish on the menu is not a
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big
deal.
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So
that the young
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people
can
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change
the
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food
that they have daily without spending a ton of
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time
on shopping for the ingredients and it
also
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helps
them to
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cut
back the cooking
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time
requirements in half.

Another reason for the preference of consuming
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fast
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food
is the accessibility. As the above-mentioned explanation, junk
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food
is not
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only
convenient
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but
also
easy to can
be consumed
no matter where you are or where you go. Recently, there are
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a lot of
options available for
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fast
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food
buyers,
for instance
, they can sit in the store to eat what they have
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bought
, or you can order takeout
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food
online.
What is more
, in
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some
countries
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like USA
or even in Vietnam,
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fast
-food restaurants like McDonald’s provide the drive-thru option, where you can
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buy
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food
the at the drive-thru window and eat it right in your car.
Thus
, a quick meal like
that is
suitable for those who have a hectic schedule at work or school whether they are young or mature.

In conclusion
, it is
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hard
to deny that
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so
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many
young
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men
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love
eating
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fast
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food
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because
of its convenience.
However
, junk
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food
should not
be consumed
day by day.
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IELTS essay Why young men like eating fast food

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
373 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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