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Why you are using computer and how and what is the best program for you and why ?

Why you are using computer and how and what is the best program for you and why? 55E0N

All the people using computers either for games or social media or some thing else, while I’m a student I have a lot of school stuff and duties, most my time doing homework and making scientific research, on holiday and free time I have my one investment on internet this help me to able end my university study. The computer is worldwide, I’m still learning more and more about it, there are amazing programs, but Microsoft bunch are still my favorite selection especially the PowerPoint.

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 my university study. The computer is worldwide, I’m still
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IELTS essay Why you are using computer and how and what is the best program for you and why?

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American English

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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