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Why the salary is higher for high authorities rather than workers.

Why the salary is higher for high authorities rather than workers. BJJr9
It is hottable debate, work in similar companies why the remuneration is different between the manager and employs. i agree with this statement and I will discuss my point in the upcoming paragraphs. There are numerous of views related to wages. Firstly, bourgeois had done the hard work around the clock to acquire the knowledge about the professions and devote many years to study then choose the career to move ahead in life and achieve the goals. Secondly, productivity is uplifted by the seniors as they execute the hard work to rise the economy as well as the image of the organisation which is helpful to boost the financial level of nations.
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debate, work in similar
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companies
why the remuneration is
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different
between the manager and employs.
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agree
with this statement and I will discuss my point in the upcoming paragraphs.

There are numerous of views related to wages.
Firstly
, bourgeois had done the
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hard
work around the clock to acquire the knowledge about the professions and devote
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many
years to study then choose the career to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
ahead in life and achieve the goals.
Secondly
, productivity
is uplifted
by the seniors as they execute the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work to rise the economy
as well
as the image of the
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organisation
which is helpful to boost the financial level of nations.

IELTS essay Why the salary is higher for high authorities rather than workers.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
112 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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