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People have different expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Discuss both view points and State your opinion.

People have different expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. m11ML
There are distinct assumptions of everyone about employment. Some people believes that working on a fixed position in certain organisation for long time, is beneficial for them. While other argue that different jobs in different companies, offers them new opportunities to grow up in their careers. It is agreed that posting in various institutions provides distinctive experiences, while employed in a particular firm for long time; provides security, greater depth of satisfaction in workplace relationships and promotions. Few individuals remains in a group as loyalty for that business. Furthermore that earned faith makes them trustworthy in view of employer, which eventually provides ennoblement. Hence making a rise in salary and position, helps them lessen the financial issues. Ultimately, this provides them peace of mind. However, remaining in a particular set up makes one efficient in his/her job profile. For example, in some specific professions like doctors, engineers; it is necessity for their professional establishment to stay in a stream. Moreover, it makes them more competent and famous. For other humans, it is excitatory to have inconsistency in service. As they have new experiences to rejuvenate. Moreover, with wide range of job experiences; they become more skilled and multitasking. They also came across different work environments that makes them more adjustable. On the other hand, because of frequently changing workplace; develops non reliability for managing directors. For example, when one does not sticks to one group and has changed companies frequently, their boss feel that they are non reliable as they can leave job anytime and can reveal their secrets to anyone easily. In conclusion, although variation in workplace gives wide range of career because of multitasking ability. However, it is better to work with fidelity and rise in single set up which gives personal fulfilment.
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position in certain
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for long time, is beneficial for them. While other argue that
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different
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in
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companies
, offers them new opportunities to grow up in their careers. It is
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agreed
that posting in various institutions
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provides
distinctive experiences, while employed in a particular firm for long time;
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provides
security, greater depth of satisfaction in workplace relationships and promotions.

Few individuals remains in a group as loyalty for that business.
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Furthermore
that earned faith
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makes
them trustworthy in view of employer, which
eventually
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provides
ennoblement.
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Hence
making a rise in salary and position,
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helps
them lessen the financial issues.
Ultimately
, this
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provides
them peace of mind.
However
, remaining in a particular set up
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makes
one efficient in his/her
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job
profile.
For example
, in
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some
specific professions like doctors, engineers; it is necessity for their professional establishment to stay in a stream.
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, it
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makes
them more competent and
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famous
.

For other humans, it is
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excitatory
to have inconsistency in service.
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As
they have new experiences to rejuvenate.
Moreover
, with wide range of
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job
experiences; they become more skilled and multitasking. They
also
came across
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different
work environments that
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makes
them more adjustable.
On the other hand
,
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because
of
frequently
changing workplace; develops non reliability for managing directors.
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, when one does not
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sticks
to one group and has
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changed
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companies
frequently
, their boss feel that they are
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non reliable
as they can
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leave
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job
anytime and can reveal their secrets to anyone
easily
.

In conclusion
, although variation in workplace gives wide range of career
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because
of multitasking ability.
However
, it is better to work with fidelity and rise in single set up which gives personal
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fulfilment
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IELTS essay People have different expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently.

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