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In some countries salary he’s higher range In in some countries government should control regarding to this statement dDiscuss both views and give your opinion

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the
first
day or two main reasons the
first
and foremost is the
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government
can I
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encourage their citizens to attract the visitors who
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USA he is not charging any amount of the money is too has citizens who has
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change
the countries.

Second reason confuse the
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salary
it’s depends on the field they selected the doctors engineers and lawyers how is this
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salary
is depends on the one day to wear has political and his celebrities there is no limit for this always should not
be controlled
I completely disagree with this

In my opinion controlling of
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salary
is a waste of who is the person has more money she’s faced access to
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government
in the economy can be better in the fact
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Conclusion conclusion
would like to repeat
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salary
is the most
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thing for her animation construction
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IELTS essay In some countries salary he’s higher range In in some countries government should control regarding to this statement dDiscuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
230 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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