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why reading are more beneficial than watching TV?

why reading are more beneficial than watching TV? BwlBm

The audience consists of children aged 12 to 18 and their parents. I chose this group because I have two grandchildren, ages 15 and 12, respectively. They spend many hours a day watching television, particularly cartoons. I've never seen them read anything other than textbooks, and their parents don't encourage them to read anything else. According to research from the University of Sussex, UK, 6 minutes of reading can reduce stress levels by up to 68%. Spanish researchers have found that reading books about substances with a particular taste (e. g. jasmine, cinnamon or garlic) helps boost the brain's olfactory centers. Meanwhile, French researchers say reading action books (such as football books) will help you improve motor function.

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. They spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 hours a day watching television, particularly
 cartoons. I've never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 them read anything other than textbooks, and their parents don't encourage them to read anything else. According to research from the University of Sussex, UK, 6 minutes of reading can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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stress
 levels by up to 68%.

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 jasmine, cinnamon or garlic) This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 boost the brain's olfactory centers. Meanwhile, French researchers say reading action books (such as football books) will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 motor function. 