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why men's sport is more popular

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These days the coverage of world of sport is mostly dominated by the sports that men do. There has to be a reason that we are going to find the reason behind this. The medias are the organizations that decide to pay attention to sports and cover them for the world. There are a couple of reasons that make men's athletics more valuable than women's. First the historical background, it's known that the body building and other basic athletics had a historical background. Back in the day in Roman Empire and Ancient Greece the soldiers had to build their bodies and be stronger, then they used to show their powers to each other. As time passes by, the body show became some sort of art and some athletics like throwing balls and spears became more popular, the male soldiers were the first people who have participated in the very first tournaments of this kind of sports. Beside of the historical background, there would probably be some physical advantages too. It's not hidden to anyone that the average power and condition of men are far better than women's body. For example in an athletics like basketball, men have better performances due to the fact that they are stronger and taller. Being better at anything makes it more enjoyable to watch for other people. After all, although the sport is something essential for being healthy for both genders, I think that being interesting to watch and some historical references are the reasons that make men's sport more popular.
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sports
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and cover them for the world. There are a couple of
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make
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's athletics more valuable than women's.
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the
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historical
background, it's known that the
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body
building and other basic athletics had a
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historical
background. Back in the day in Roman Empire and Ancient Greece the soldiers had to build their
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bodies
and be stronger, then they
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used
to
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show
their powers to each other. As time passes by, the
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show
became
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sort of art and
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athletics like throwing balls and spears became more popular, the male soldiers were the
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who have participated in the
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first
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probably
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physical advantages too. It's not hidden to anyone that the average power and condition of
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are far better than women's
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.
For example
in an athletics like basketball,
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men
have better performances due to the fact that they are stronger and taller. Being better at anything
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makes
it more enjoyable to
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watch
for other
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people
.
After all
, although the
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sport
is something essential for being healthy for both genders, I
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think
that being interesting to
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more popular.
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IELTS essay why men's sport is more popular

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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