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Nobdy buy printing newspaper and magazine

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Now a days, people will read any kind of book, newspaper, magazines on online. They also stored thousands of books on app. This make life everything device easier and they can thotel, re without paying. Today's people he is very busy. They have no time to read books and magazine his free time People sous instant news in his phone and if they want to read some books they save into his Storeage place. The most of the factories think that the painting "newspapaer or books is the Chepest things. On the other side, magazines, news paper trinted wel last more years ago. They will Connect people with their fictures printed in the newspaper and magazines. In
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will read any kind of
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, newspaper,
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magazines
on online. They
also
stored thousands of
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books
on app. This
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make
life everything device
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and
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magazine
his free time
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books
they save into his
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that the painting
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newspapaer
or
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magazines
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fictures
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IELTS essay Nobdy buy printing newspaper and magazine

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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