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Why is Japan called as the most livable country in the world?

Why is Japan called as the most livable country in the world? rbrrL
Although it is considered a rather dangerous place when there are frequent earthquakes of nature, many earthquakes, tsunamis, natural disasters. . . However, Japan is still a country with a large number of visitors and live in the Top 10 in the world. So what is it that makes Japan a place that so many people definitely want to visit and live in? Japan is obvious that the citizens of this nation have a decent standard of living or can afford a substantial amount of living expenditures. . . Renting a one-person apartment in the heart of Japan's cities, for example, is projected to cost 81, 890 yen a month. In addition to the already high rent, the cost of living in Japan is increased by 20, 120 yen for essential utilities such as electricity, water, heating, and garbage in a 915-square-foot apartment. Second, in comparison to the United States, the cost of living in Japan differs. For example, consumer prices in Japan are 14. 36 per cent higher than in the United States, while grocery costs in Japan are 17. 77 per cent higher than in the United States. Although the cost of living in Japan is expensive, Japan provides a chance for success due to its high educational success rates and strong labor force, allowing for a progressive increase in income to cover the cost of living in Japan. Another reason that Japan is a country worth living in is that the quality of the food and their diet are healthy. Firstly, with food quality, we know that vegetables and fruit in Japan are very clean and meet the standards. For example, they do not use chemicals, instead of use a system to measure temperature and rainfall to control the right humidity for growing vegetables. Secondly, about their meal, Japanese people eat mostly fresh and unprocessed food, with very little refined food or sugar. The Japanese diet is famous for its emphasis on fresh fruits, vegetables, and seaweed while some meats are consumed. In fact, fish is not only edible but also extremely healthy and common. For example, a study conducted by various researchers found that people who ate fish at least once per week had a 50% lower risk of dying from heart disease than those who ate fish less than once per month. In addition, daily consumption of foods high in soy and fish can also play a significant role in reducing the risk of cardiovascular disease. The Japanese also have the lowest obesity rates among men and women, as well as the highest life expectancy in the world. According to the World Health Organization, in 2015 Japan was the second nation in the world with the highest life expectancy. Japan is the best place for living also for its mental health. It is a country of 127 million people with a life expectancy of 82 years and has been known for its minimal stress, low crime rates and high living standards. The country’s suicide rate is the lowest among G7 countries, at about 20 per 100, 000 people. This is because Japan's society has traditional values that are still strong today. It can be attributed to its strong sense of community spirit with neighbors being very supportive of each other which helps keep people happy during difficult times when they may otherwise feel desperate or alone. Japan also has one of the lowest levels of stress in the world because people see it as a purely negative emotion. It's seen as something that just needs to be dealt with using deep breathing exercises or deliberate relaxation techniques. Moreover, the country has the second-lowest level of crimes in the world. That's because its authorities are famous for being effective and efficient. This has led to zero widespread crime in Japan, which is why no place on earth has a lower crime rate than Japan. Also, crimes that occur are quickly solved with swift punishment. Last but not least, Land of the Rising Sun has an average income of around 25, 000 USD per year. That is considered as one of the highest incomes in the world because it enables people to live their lives to the fullest. People are able to live comfortably with their families because Japan's cost of living is relatively low compared to other developed countries. On the other hand, Japan is a country poor in minerals, with little arable land and due to many volcanoes, frequent earthquakes, and it has to suffer the great consequences of war. However, Japan has carried out reforms and achieved many achievements in many fields of economy, society, education. . . and has become the second-largest industrial power in the world after the United States. Japan focuses a lot on high technology with the aim of bringing it into people's daily lives and also ranks first in the world in science and technology. The fishing industry and wood production are the two most developed industries in Japan, with a huge annual catch of up to thousands of tons of fish per year in most of the prefectures. Japan is split into four economic zones, each corresponding to one of four big islands, with Honshu having the most developed economy due to the concentration of significant industrial centers: Tokyo, Yokohama, Kyoto, Osaka, and so on. When coming to Japan, everyone has to respect the economy that always holds the 3rd position in the world. However, compared to other countries in the region, this place has an impressive difference because of its contrasting beauty. Next to a modern Japan is a boldly traditional Japan. When you come to Japan to travel, you will not be surprised by mega cities like Tokyo, Osaka. . . known as cities that never sleep. But the quiet, old features of a traditional Kyoto with ancient temples, ancient alleys are full of tranquility. Another special thing is that all regions of Japan have their own festivals, each festival has many attractive performances. Additionally, you can travel to Japan around the year. Whether in spring, summer, autumn or winter, Japan always has its own beauty. If you travel to Japan in winter, you can go see the ski slopes. Or from the cable car looking down with an altitude of more than 200m, you will see the white side of the treetops, looking far away like small white undulating mountains like Fukushima Prefecture. On the contrary, in the summer the weather is quite hot, the beaches of Okinawa are always the most popular destinations. In spring, Japan is splendid with cherry blossoms. Finally, in the autumn, when the weather is cool, you can admire the beautiful red maple forests. Japan is not only a country with a developed economy in the world but also has a rich traditional culture in national identity, so it has attracted numerous foreign tourists. When coming to this country, you will feel a very different atmosphere and lifestyle, completely different from what you have experienced. For these reasons, Japan has been named as one of the most livable countries in the world.
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IELTS essay Why is Japan called as the most livable country in the world?

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