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Advantages and disadvantages of cities and the countries

Advantages and disadvantages of cities and the countries KW8W3
With the growth in population, the desire for urbanism has become more common. One of the most important factors causing this is the facilities and opportunities that urban life has provided people. From my perspective, whether urban life is better or not, depends on personal demand and the way people want their lives to be. It is obvious that cities have offered the highest levels of education and the highest income jobs, even though we cannot ignore or deny the enormous stress cities have brought to us. Whereas many people travel to villages and the countries, in order to meditate and avoid being nervous for a while. In general, urbanism and ruralism both have either benefits or detriment which we as an individual in society have to choose between them regarding our own wishes
With the growth in population, the desire for urbanism has become more common.

One of the most
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important
factors causing this is the facilities and opportunities that urban life has provided
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people
.

From my perspective, whether urban life is better or not, depends on personal demand and the way
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people
want their
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lives
to be. It is obvious that cities have offered the highest levels of education and the highest income jobs,
even though
we cannot
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ignore
or deny the enormous
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stress
cities have brought to us. Whereas
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many
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people
travel to villages and the countries, in order to meditate and avoid being nervous for a while.

In general
, urbanism and
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ruralism
both have either benefits or detriment which we as an individual in society
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have to
choose between them regarding our
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own
wishes

IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages of cities and the countries

Essay
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4 paragraphs
133 words
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