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Why I chose Bilkent University?

Why I chose Bilkent University? 2Xy6
Everyone in the world has the desire to study abroad or to study in a good university through which one can build up their future. I also as one of the Afghan youth want to boost my knowledge including my employable skills by studying for a bachelor at Bilkent University. Due to the above-mentioned reason, I would like to apply for the scholarship. I have a significant passion to avail myself a special opportunity to assume a study program abroad. For example, one of the countries that I like to study is Turkey. This country provides quality education as I searched about it. Moreover, Ankara is also one of the most beautiful cities in Turkey, which has distinct educational institutions and learning places. Another reason is the quality of the university. Bilkent University is a global ranker that many of its professors are qualified and graduates of prestigious universities such as Cambridge or Yale Universities. Moreover, Bilkent University provides noble opportunities for international students in all cases, such as accommodation, dining services, sports facilities, and social and cultural activities. Last and not least, for any program that we would assume is the foundation. For example, when we build a house, the first thing that comes to our mind is the intensity of bases. The same like this, when we start our higher education, we have to choose the best option that exists. That’s why I applied for Bilkent University, which is the best option to start higher education.
Everyone in the world has the desire to
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abroad or to
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in a
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good
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university
through which one can build up their future. I
also
as one of the Afghan youth want to boost my knowledge including my employable
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skills
by studying for a bachelor at
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Bilkent
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University
. Due to the above-mentioned reason, I would like to apply for the scholarship.

I have a significant passion to avail myself a special opportunity to assume a
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study
program abroad.
For example
, one of the countries that I like to
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study
is Turkey. This country provides quality education as I searched about it.
Moreover
, Ankara is
also
one of the most
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beautiful
cities in Turkey, which has distinct educational institutions and learning places.

Another reason is the quality of the
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university
.
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Bilkent
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University
is a global ranker that
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many
of its professors
are qualified
and graduates of prestigious
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universities
such as Cambridge or Yale
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Universities
.
Moreover
,
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Bilkent
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University
provides noble opportunities for international students in all cases, such as accommodation, dining services, sports facilities, and social and cultural activities.

Last and not least, for any program that we would assume is the foundation.
For example
, when we build a
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house
, the
first
thing that
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comes
to our mind is the intensity of bases. The same
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like
this, when we
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start
our higher education, we
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choose the best option that exists. That’s why I applied for
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Bilkent
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University
, which is the best option to
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higher education.

IELTS essay Why I chose Bilkent University?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
248 words
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