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Why do you want to study in the United States? Why do you want to study Linguistics?

Why do you want to study in the United States? Why do you want to study Linguistics? bbdP3
One peculiar experience of being half-Javanese and half-Endenese in Indonesia is constantly witnessing gaps in developing great potentials between the two places. Aside from the infamous education and economic disparity that we are still struggling to overcome within the Indonesia archipelago, most rural areas are suffering from the hardship of building relationships with the outside world due to the language barrier. While not all people have the urgency to comprehend English, the lingua franca which connects citizens from across the globe, workers devoting themselves in the development of a region or even nation should find this language a mandatory tool to construct a strong network between countries. My relationship with the development sector initially was in fact unintentional. In 2015, my father organized an independent fundraising program for Nuabosi, my family’s village in Ende, East Nusa Tenggara. As the only English-speaker at that time, I volunteered as an Indonesian-English interpreter. Intending to get better water access and sanitation, I managed to undertake diplomatic conversation between the local inhabitants and a potential donor from Australia. Nonetheless, amid our project’s success, as the United Nations (UN) established the Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) shortly after the program, I realized that continuously depending on others to communicate with the world due to language barriers was not a sustainable way to develop the potentials in Indonesia. Unfortunately, while some people like me find it easy to access proper training and education, some areas are even at high risk of losing Primary Schools. This circumstance had influenced me to take part in sustainably advancing remote areas in Indonesia through English training for developmental purposes. With the establishment of SDGs, I understood that there is no one way to achieve these goals. Some people fight for them by composing policies while some by advocating human rights. We collectively develop the world around us by implementing our own expertise with the dream that one day 17 issues that we struggle today will disappear. With this in mind, I pursued a Bachelor’s degree in English Letters funded by the Ministry of Education and Culture Republic of Indonesia to observe English as a communication tool to achieve SDGs through a wider lens. In my third semester, I got my foundation on Second Language Acquisition (SLA) through the Socio-linguistics course that I took. I managed to understand language teaching methods based on the natural way humans acquire languages. Aside from strengthening my analytical and scientific skills through courses and research projects, during 3. 5 years of my study, I complemented my education with Public Speaking, Business Writing, and Stylistics to gain a greater comprehension of English for communication specifically in development sectors. The skills that I obtained during my degree then implemented in an academic environment through my job as a Lecturer’s Assistant at my former university from 2018 to 2019. As I grew the fascination towards Teaching English for Speakers of Other Languages (TESOL), I continued to challenge myself to train and teach more people. After graduating, my role as an English Instructor in the Language Institute of Sanata Dharma since 2019 introduced me to English for Specific Purposes (ESP) which is parallel to my interest for English as a tool to achieve SDGs. I have undertaken several teaching projects focusing on various Academic and Occupational Purposes, including Academic Writing and preparing congregants assigned for service abroad. Dealing with materials development for specific goals and occupations for students and workers and Indonesia and other countries, I have hands-on experience in ESP teaching and curriculum design that I intend to grow. Despite the abundant values and skills I gained through my volunteer work, education, and professional experiences, I continuously grow eager to expand my skills, particularly in ESP, by pursuing a Master’s degree in Linguistics specialized in SLA and Pedagogical Applications to SLA Theory. This will enable me to pursue a career in training people from a wide range of sectors with the intention of developing remote areas in Indonesia, such as civil servants, authorities, and public health workers. Combining my background and future learning, I wish to contribute to this global mission through my expertise in English.
One peculiar experience of being half-Javanese and
half-Endenese
in Indonesia is
constantly


witnessing gaps in developing great potentials between the two places. Aside from the infamous

education and economic disparity that we are
still
struggling to overcome within the Indonesia

archipelago, most rural
areas
are suffering from the hardship of building relationships with the

outside world due to the
language
barrier. While not all
people
have the urgency to comprehend

English, the lingua franca which connects citizens from across the globe, workers devoting

themselves in the
development
of a region or even nation should find this
language
a mandatory

tool to construct a strong network between countries.

My relationship with the
development
sector
initially
was in fact unintentional. In 2015, my

father organized an independent fundraising program for
Nuabosi
, my family’s village in
Ende
, East

Nusa
Tenggara
. As the
only
English-speaker at that time, I volunteered as an Indonesian-English

interpreter. Intending to
get
better water access and sanitation, I managed to undertake diplomatic

conversation between the local inhabitants and a potential donor from Australia. Nonetheless, amid

our project’s success, as the United Nations (UN) established the Sustainable
Development
Goals

(
SDGs
) shortly after the program, I realized that
continuously
depending on others to communicate

with the world due to
language
barriers was not a sustainable way to develop the potentials in

Indonesia. Unfortunately, while
some
people
like me find it easy to access proper training and

education,
some
areas
are even at high
risk
of losing Primary Schools. This circumstance had

influenced me to
take part
in
sustainably
advancing remote
areas
in Indonesia
through
English

training for developmental purposes.

With the establishment of
SDGs
, I understood that there is no one way to achieve these

goals.
Some
people
fight for them by composing policies while
some
by advocating human rights.

We
collectively
develop the world around us by implementing our
own
expertise with the dream

that one day 17 issues that we struggle
today
will disappear. With this in mind, I pursued a

Bachelor’s degree in English Letters funded by the Ministry of Education and Culture Republic of

Indonesia to observe English as a communication tool to achieve
SDGs
through
a wider lens. In my

third semester, I
got
my foundation on Second
Language
Acquisition (SLA)
through
the

Socio-linguistics
course that I took. I managed to understand
language
teaching
methods based on

the natural way humans acquire
languages
. Aside from strengthening my analytical and scientific

skills
through
courses and research projects, during 3. 5 years of my study, I complemented my

education with Public Speaking, Business Writing, and Stylistics to gain a greater comprehension of

English for communication
specifically
in
development
sectors. The
skills
that I obtained during my

degree then implemented in an academic environment
through
my job as a Lecturer’s Assistant at

my former university from 2018 to 2019.

As I grew the fascination towards
Teaching
English for Speakers of Other Languages

(TESOL), I continued to challenge myself to train and teach more
people
. After graduating, my role

as an English Instructor in the
Language
Institute of
Sanata
Dharma since 2019 introduced me to

English for Specific Purposes (ESP) which is parallel to my interest for English as a tool to achieve

SDGs
. I have undertaken several
teaching
projects focusing on various Academic and Occupational

Purposes, including Academic Writing and preparing congregants assigned for service abroad.

Dealing with materials
development
for specific goals and occupations for students and workers

and Indonesia and other countries, I have hands-on experience in ESP
teaching
and curriculum

design that I intend to grow.

Despite the abundant values and
skills
I gained
through
my volunteer work, education, and

professional experiences, I
continuously
grow eager to expand my
skills
,
particularly
in ESP, by

pursuing a Master’s degree in Linguistics specialized in SLA and Pedagogical Applications to SLA

Theory. This will enable me to pursue a career in training
people
from a wide range of sectors with

the intention of developing remote
areas
in Indonesia, such as civil servants, authorities, and public

health workers. Combining my background and future learning, I wish to contribute to this global

mission
through
my expertise in English.
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IELTS essay Why do you want to study in the United States? Why do you want to study Linguistics?

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