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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. studying on your own taking lessons with a private tutor taking lessons as part of a class taking lessons online going to live in a country where the language is spoken v.3

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. studying on your own taking lessons with a private tutor taking lessons as part of a class taking lessons online going to live in a country where the language is spoken v. 3
Nowadays people want to be bilingual and multilingual. They are learning a plethora of languages by practice of different methods, such as; self study, taking the help of a professional teacher, attending classes in colleges, using online resources, and some living in the nation where that wording is used. I think the most effective way to learn that speech is taking help of the private assistant. To begin with, when person self study to learn any foreign sound he can read, write, speak and listen, if he has a basic knowledge of that language. That might help them improve the vocabulary of the wording, but by self study, they cannot correct themselves, how to properly use that word in the different scenarios. Therefore, they do not know how to use the synonyms in different sentences. Nevertheless, people used to take lessons in classes. Where they face different kind of problems. For example, shyness, feel inferior if other students have a wide range of knowledge, as well as, in class they have to express their opinion in huge groups and even some people may do not get the opportunity to speak because of large gathering. In addition a teacher cannot give proper attention towards every pupil. Taking an online lesson and usage of the internet sources may be helpful for students, that they can listen and read stuff repeatedly. Buying expensive premiums cannot be ignored. They do not get time to express that accent in the real world and just in the virtual world, that is not enough for learning. As well as, online devices likely, computer, laptop and mobile phone have a negative effect on their eyesight. However, some people move to abroad to learn that communication skill. They view that if they will listen and talk with natives, it could helpful for them, because they will get the opportunity to listen native accent, I think this is not worth. The most effective way to learn that vocabulary is hire the private instructor. Who knows the foreign sound and your speech. That helper can translate and make understanding how to learn the foreign speech. Not only this, we can hire that teacher, according to our preference with whom we can feel comfortable and ask him any question without hesitation if we have any kind of doubt. In addition, person can take classes according to his time whenever the learner is free, a person does not need to be worried about specific time. To conclude, while there are different methods to learn another voice, yet I think the most effective method is to hire a personal instructor.
Nowadays
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people
want to be bilingual and multilingual. They are learning a plethora of languages by practice of
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different
methods, such as; self study, taking the
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help
of a professional teacher, attending
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classes
in colleges, using online resources, and
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some
living in the nation where that wording is
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used
. I
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think
the most effective way to
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learn
that speech is taking
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help
of the private assistant.

To
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begin
with, when person self study to
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learn
any foreign sound he can read, write, speak and
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listen
, if he has a basic knowledge of that language. That might
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help
them
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improve
the vocabulary of the wording,
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but
by self study, they cannot correct themselves, how to
properly
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use
that word in the
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different
scenarios.
Therefore
, they do not know how to
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use
the synonyms in
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different
sentences.

Nevertheless
,
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people
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used
to take lessons in
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classes
.
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Where
they face
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different
kind of problems.
For example
, shyness, feel inferior if other students have a wide range of knowledge,
as well
as, in
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class
they
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have to
express their opinion in huge groups and even
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some
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people
may do not
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get
the opportunity to speak
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because
of large gathering. In
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addition
a teacher cannot give proper attention towards every pupil.

Taking an online lesson and usage of the internet sources may be helpful for students, that they can
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listen
and read stuff
repeatedly
. Buying expensive premiums cannot be
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ignored
. They do not
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get
time to express that accent in the real world and
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just
in the virtual world,
that is
not
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enough
for learning.
As well
as, online devices likely, computer, laptop and mobile phone have a
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negative
effect on their eyesight.
However
,
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some
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people
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move
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to abroad to
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learn
that communication
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skill
. They view that if they will
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listen
and talk with natives, it
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could helpful
for them,
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because
they will
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get
the opportunity to
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listen
native accent, I
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think
this is not worth.

The most effective way to
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learn
that vocabulary is hire the private instructor. Who knows the foreign sound and your speech. That helper can translate and
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make
understanding how to
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learn
the foreign speech. Not
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only
this, we can hire that teacher, according to our preference with whom we can feel comfortable and ask him any question without hesitation if we have any kind of doubt.
In addition
, person can take
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classes
according to his time whenever the learner is free, a person does not need to
be worried
about specific time.

To conclude
, while there are
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different
methods to
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learn
another voice,
yet
I
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think
the most effective method is to hire a personal instructor.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. studying on your own taking lessons with a private tutor taking lessons as part of a class taking lessons online going to live in a country where the language is spoken v. 3

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
436 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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