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Why do some people do not do sport?

Why do some people do not do sport? DVda6

Nowadays everyone believes sport is useful for their health. On the other hand, some people do not take part in doing sport for some reasons that barrier them to participate it. First of all, these days people's schedule is very compact and they work hard during the day, so they do not have much time to put exercise in their daily routines. Furthermore, some sports like ski needs immense money to have joy because the accessories of it are really expensive to provide then do not follow their eager sport. Last but not least, some people do not have motivation, in addition, they do not do sport therefore instead of that they prefer to stay at home. (117 words)

Nowadays everyone believes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 is useful for their health. On the other hand
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in doing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reasons that barrier them to participate it. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, these days Do not use 's with a verb. Did you mean "peoples"?peoples
people's
 schedule is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).compact, and
compact and
 they work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 during the day, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they do not have much time to put exercise in their daily routines. Furthermore
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 like ski needs immense money to have joy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the accessories of it are really
 expensive to provide then do not follow their eager You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 do not have motivation, in addition
, they do not do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
therefore
instead
 of that they prefer to stay at home. (117 words)