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Development of crew-less cargo ships

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The reading and the lecture are both about the Crewless cargo ships. The author of the reading presented three points about the Creless cargo ship advantages over the crew cargo. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article that goods travel oversease still transported on container ships, although componies discovering crewless cargo, which do not require man control. His poisition is that autonomous cargo misplaced and maintenance is very difficult, so that is not an good idea. First, the writer claims that humanless cargo would control the labor costs for international componies those are involved in the trades. Furthermore, it is stated in the article that paying slary including etables, sleeping rooms, and entertainment to people those are on voyage would be costly. Therefore, using the autonomous cargo will be helpful in reducing the cost. In contrast, the lecturer argues that autonomouns crew will not reduce the cost. Additionally he mentains that human oprated crew reduces the cost of the voyage becaouse they can control the ship and damage, however crewless cargo cannot repair the damage and unrepair cargo can couse the more damage the ship and it may improve the cost of the voyage. Secondly, the authoer mentions that crewless ships could be less attractive subject to pirates. On top of that, headds that crew contains valuble goods cewless cargo will control and away the becouse the desigen the crewless cargo, so pirates will not be able to acess the ship. However, the lecturer calls this arguments into question by saying that less attractive cargo possesses the GPS and computerised system which can be hacked by the pirates and misguide the ships at unwanted
The reading and the lecture are both about the Crewless
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cargo
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ships
. The author of the reading presented three points about the
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Creless
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cargo
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ship
advantages over the
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crew
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cargo
.
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The
lecturer disputes the claims made in the article that
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goods
travel
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oversease
still
transported on container
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ships
, although
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componies
discovering crewless
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cargo
, which do not require
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man
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control
. His
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poisition
is that autonomous
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cargo
misplaced and maintenance is
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very
difficult,
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so
that is
not
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an
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good
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idea
.

First
, the writer claims that
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humanless
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cargo
would
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control
the labor
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costs
for international
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componies
those
are involved
in the trades.
Furthermore
, it
is stated
in the article that paying
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slary
including
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etables
, sleeping rooms, and entertainment to
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people
those are on voyage would be costly.
Therefore
, using the autonomous
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cargo
will be helpful in reducing the
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cost
.
In contrast
, the lecturer argues that
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autonomouns
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crew
will not
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reduce
the
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cost
.
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Additionally
he
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mentains
that human
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oprated
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crew
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reduces
the
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cost
of the voyage
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becaouse
they can
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control
the
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ship
and damage,
however
crewless
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cargo
cannot repair the damage and
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unrepair
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cargo
can
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couse
the more damage the
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ship
and it may
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improve
the
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cost
of the voyage.

Secondly
, the
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authoer
mentions that crewless
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ships
could be less attractive subject to pirates.
On top of that
,
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headds
that
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crew
contains
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valuble
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goods
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cewless
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cargo
will
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control
and away the
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becouse
the
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desigen
the crewless
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cargo
,
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so
pirates will not be able to
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acess
the
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ship
.
However
, the lecturer calls
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this
arguments into question by saying that less attractive
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cargo
possesses the GPS and
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computerised
system which can
be hacked
by the pirates and misguide the
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ships
at unwanted
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IELTS essay Development of crew-less cargo ships

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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