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Why did he choose France?

Why did he choose France? xaeGw
France's love, in enormous, pushed him to study overseas in 2015. He had a lot of time to study in France. Right now, he is the general manager of Hilton Hanoi. He said in the interview that the time he learned at Portrait Métier university brought him many understandings of a major, especially characteristic o French culinary culture. In France, food has stories that contain historical information about the country and symboling of culture. Each dish is delicate and created by the chef in France. In France, food has stories that contain historical information about the country and symboling of culture. Each dish is delicate and created by the chef in France. He is enjoying his position in the hospitality industry. It is a masterclass in communication, understanding customer behavior, and being flexible with peers. The job is coaching for him to gain respect for people, which is the first principle in the hospitality industry. He completed it and has been pushing philosophy in the future.
France's
love
, in enormous, pushed him to study overseas in 2015.

He had
a lot of
time to study in France. Right
now
, he is the general manager of Hilton Hanoi. He said in the interview that the time he learned at Portrait Métier university brought him
many
understandings of a major,
especially
characteristic o French culinary culture. In France, food has stories that contain historical information about the country and
symboling
of culture. Each dish is delicate and created by the chef in France.

In France, food has stories that contain historical information about the country and
symboling
of culture. Each dish is delicate and created by the chef in France.

He is enjoying his position in the hospitality industry. It is a masterclass in communication, understanding customer behavior, and being flexible with peers. The job is coaching for him to gain respect for
people
, which is the
first
principle in the hospitality industry. He completed it and has been pushing philosophy in the future.
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IELTS essay Why did he choose France?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
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