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Why are you applying to United World Collages?

Why are you applying to United World Collages? 5BqLV
The main reason why i`m apllying to UWC is that: First of all I really wanna change my study field. The second reason is that I want to exchange my skills with others, by the way starting study at UWC will be a good option for me. I know exactly what I want to achieve, and this collage will absolutely vital starting up on my career. I usually spend my spare time reading books or playing guitar. I like reading a lot. Also new and trending self-help books or novels and my favourite genres include motivation books, romance and detective novels. Like loyalty book reader, I believe that reading up more books improves your mind and gives you opportunity to be intelligent.
The main reason why
i`m
apllying
to UWC is that:
First of all
I
really
wanna
change
my study field. The second reason is that I want to exchange my
skills
with others, by the way starting study at UWC will be a
good
option for me. I know exactly what I want to achieve, and this collage will
absolutely
vital starting up on my career. I
usually
spend my spare time reading
books
or playing guitar.
I
like reading a lot.
Also
new and trending self-
help
books
or novels and my
favourite
genres include motivation
books
, romance and detective novels. Like loyalty
book
reader, I believe that reading up more
books
improves
your mind and gives you opportunity to be intelligent.
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IELTS essay Why are you applying to United World Collages?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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