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Why are you applying for financial aid?

Why are you applying for financial aid? qQmND
the reasons behind applying for this financial aid are first, the current economical and financial status of my country and relevantly me moreover, not having any access to International Payment Gateways such as PayPal and MasterCards, etc due to various sanctions that the government of Iran is facing during these years. to be more specific, during the last decades, as a consequence of political and managemental misdecisions of the government the national currency of Iran has lost its value in comparison to foreign currencies such as USD and become one of the least valued currencies in the world. thereby, even the most reasonable courses seem expensive for most people of Iran with average or minimum salaries.
the
reasons behind applying for this financial aid are
first
, the
current
economical and financial status of my country and
relevantly
me
moreover
, not having any access to International Payment Gateways such as PayPal and
MasterCards
, etc due to various sanctions that the
government
of Iran is facing during these years.

to
be more specific, during the last decades, as a consequence of political and
managemental
misdecisions
of the
government
the national currency of Iran has lost its value
in comparison
to foreign currencies such as USD and become one of the least valued currencies in the world.
thereby
, even the most reasonable courses seem expensive for most
people
of Iran with average or minimum salaries.
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IELTS essay Why are you applying for financial aid?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
116 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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