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In all of the subjects in high school, Math is my favorite. This is the basic subject from the elementary level. However, I have to admit that it’s getting harder and harder. Being good at math brings us several advantages. Doing math exercises improves one’s brain and its brainstorm. And math is essential for every future engineer sitting here. Math is not a sublime subject, but it originates from the simplest, closest to each of us. For example a brick, a book, or a glass of water. They all have math inside. Besides, other subjects also apply math to solve, which is called interdisciplinary knowledge. That's interesting because a problem can use many different methods of different subjects to solve. I feel lucky because I have fun and love this subject.
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IELTS essay Talk about your favorite subject

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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