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Describe the first time you used a foreign language to communicate

Describe the first time you used a foreign language to communicate 0BjQ5
I have been learning English for a long time, but I haven’t had many chances to practice speaking English with native speakers. To the best of my recollection, the first time I used it was in the summer three years ago. At that time, I was hanging out with my brother in the church. Suddenly, a foreigner came up to me and asked for directions to a supermarket. Honestly, he spoke English too quickly for me to catch everything. So I required him to repeat his word slow and I finally understood and showed him the way to the nearest supermarket, it's Co. op supermaker in Vung Tau. I used body language a lot to explain the directions to him. If I remember correctly, I was translating and communicating with him at the same time. After that, he said "Thank you" to me and headed for the supermarket.
I have been learning English for a long
time
,
but
I haven’t had
many
chances to practice speaking English with native speakers. To the best of my recollection, the
first
time
I
used
it was in the summer three years ago. At that
time
, I was hanging out with my brother in the church.
Suddenly
, a foreigner came up to me and
asked for
directions to a supermarket.
Honestly
, he spoke English too
quickly
for me to catch everything.
So
I required him to repeat his word slow and I
finally
understood and
showed
him the way to the nearest supermarket, it's Co. op
supermaker
in
Vung
Tau. I
used
body language a lot to
explain
the directions to him. If I remember
correctly
, I was translating and communicating with him at the same
time
. After that, he said
"
Thank you
"
to me and headed for the supermarket.
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IELTS essay Describe the first time you used a foreign language to communicate

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  American English
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