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The number of TV programs is growing day by day some people says that it is good as it gives peoples more chance while others says it affect the quality of TV program discuss both view and give your opinion

The number of TV programs is growing day by day some people says that it is good as it gives peoples more chance while others says it affect the quality of TV program discuss both view and give your opinion V01dD
Television has become the most pervasive of all media, and there is no doubt that the number of TV programs has also grown by leaps and bounds in the last one or two decades. Some individuals opine that this situation is a good as it gives us a plethora of choices, whereas other believe that it is leading to a deterioration of the quality of TV programmes. I will discuss both view points in furthercoming paragraphs. On the one hand, people have a lot of choices because of too many TV programs. For example, if we look at the number of daily soaps, there are quite a few running on many different channels and people can select any one or two according to their taste. even the reality shows related to music, dance, adventure and a number of other things are also far too many and masses watch whichever they can relate to or whichever they are interested in. Secondly, some reality performance have given an opportunity to the common man with the talent to come froward and display his talent to the world. To epitome, in recent years, singing contest programs such as 'Sa-Re-Ga-Ma- Pa' and Indian idol have uncovered many talented singers. This is definitely a good practice for Indian TV. On the other hand, it is indubitable that there are too many such talent shows on television, which are similar in concept as well as content. Fierce competition between satellite channels for audience ratings has lead to a large number of copycat programs. The excessive production of such programs that are quite similar to the each other is a huge waste of resource and a waste of audience time. Ti examplify, since the overwhelming success of Sony TV 'Indian idol' in 2025 talent shows have hit major TV stations across India. These programs have attracted a large number of viewers. However, at the same time, the similarity of such shows has made TV quite inanimate. Vitality of the cultural industry comes from originality add creativity. Program producers must realize that people need a richer and varied choice. Furthermore, too many programs have resulted in choice overload. It is virtually impossible to keep up with everything that's worth watching and at some point, viewers need to decide what they have to watch and what they can ignore. Even the popular programs may not always be on top, that they might gradually become paltering while quality declines. To conclusion, it is clear that, even though there are choices because of an abundance of TV programs, an excess of TV programs is definitely not good. We need fewer, quality programs, which make our leisure time worthwhile.
Television has become the most pervasive of all media, and there is no doubt that the
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of TV
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programs
has
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grown by leaps and bounds in the last one or two decades.
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individuals opine that this situation is a
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good
as it gives us a plethora of
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choices
, whereas
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believe that it is leading to a deterioration of the quality of TV
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programmes
. I will discuss both view points in
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furthercoming
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TV
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programs
.
For example
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number
of daily soaps, there are quite a few running on
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different
channels and
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can select
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any one
or two according to their taste.
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even
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related to music, dance, adventure and a
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number
of
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things are
also
far too
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and masses
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whichever they can relate to or whichever they
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,
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reality performance have
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an opportunity to the common
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froward
and display his
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to the world. To epitome, in recent years, singing contest
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programs
such as '
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Sa-Re-Ga-Ma
- Pa' and Indian idol have uncovered
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many
talented singers. This is definitely a
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good
practice for Indian TV.

On the
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other
hand, it is indubitable that there are too
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many
such
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talent
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shows
on television, which are similar in concept
as well
as content. Fierce competition between satellite channels for audience ratings has lead to a large
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number
of copycat
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programs
. The excessive production of such
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programs
that are quite similar to
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is a huge waste of resource and a waste of audience time. Ti
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examplify
, since the overwhelming success of Sony TV 'Indian idol' in 2025
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talent
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shows
have hit major TV stations across India. These
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programs
have attracted a large
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number
of viewers.
However
, at the same time, the similarity of such
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shows
has made TV quite inanimate. Vitality of the cultural industry
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comes
from originality
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add
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producers
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realize that
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people
need a richer and varied choice.

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, too
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have resulted in
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overload. It is
virtually
impossible to
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up with everything that's worth watching and at
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point, viewers need to decide what they
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and what they can
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. Even the popular
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may not always be on top, that they might
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paltering
while quality declines.

To conclusion, it is
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because
of an abundance of TV
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, an excess of TV
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is definitely not
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good
. We need fewer, quality
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programs
, which
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make
our leisure time worthwhile.
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IELTS essay The number of TV programs is growing day by day some people says that it is good as it gives peoples more chance while others says it affect the quality of TV program discuss both view and give your opinion

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6 paragraphs
446 words
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