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Who would you like to go on a trip abroad with?

Who would you like to go on a trip abroad with? JwnDk
My best friend, without any doubt. Because what’s better than travelling around the world with the one person who knows you inside out. You can just sit together and gaze at the sea without saying a word at one time or just spent an entire evening checking out the men over glasses of local wine or even dance on the streets for some extra money when you are out of it. I will try our favorite dishes and will rate whose choice is better and drag her to the museums, she hates going to, without fearing that she might get offended or upset. Also, we can shop all we want and take a million selfies without anyone budging us! So, yeah, any day I would choose my best friend over anybody else to travel abroad with!
My best friend, without any doubt.
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what’s better than travelling around the world with the one person who knows you inside out. You can
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sit together and gaze at the sea without saying a word at one time or
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spent an entire evening checking out the
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over glasses of local wine or even dance on the streets for
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extra money when you are out of it. I will try our favorite dishes and will rate whose choice is better and drag her to the museums, she hates going to, without fearing that she might
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offended or upset.
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, we can shop all we want and take a million selfies without anyone budging us!

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, yeah, any day I would choose my best friend over anybody else to travel abroad with!
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IELTS essay Who would you like to go on a trip abroad with?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
136 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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