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For all the time that I have been a part of the ensemble, I have acquired a huge number of skills. Regular rehearsals helped me to hone my skills in choreography, I became more resilient and purposeful. I gained firmness of decisions and organization, because the further I improved, the more effort and time I needed. I consider teamwork to be an equally important skill developed during this time. Only full trust in the members of the ensemble makes it successful. Starting with the most inconspicuous - assistance in changing clothes (after all, sometimes a few minutes are allocated for this), ending with full support during a performance on stage.
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IELTS essay clubs clubs clubs clubsclubs

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
110 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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