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Who among artists and scientists are beneficial.Why?

Who among artists and scientists are beneficial. Why? VlB67

Both artists and scientists are supremely beneficial to the society but, in my culture artists are valued more. First and foremost artists contribute to the entertainment and leisure activities which attracts a lot of people. Secondly, artists have more face value than scientists and are recognized instantly by laymen. For instance, movie stars or singers are respected and recognized much more than scientists. In conclusion, both scientists and artists contribute immensely to the society though only artists are valued more in the society I live in.

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