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While your friend was away on vacation you stayed in his apartment. While you were there you dropped on expensive bowl and brok it.

While your friend was away on vacation you stayed in his apartment. While you were there you dropped on expensive bowl and brok it. gDJaL
Drea raavi, I hope you are doing well. I'm writing this letter to you about apologize. You know that I'm living in your apartment because you are living in Ludhiana for important work. To begin with, your apartment very beautiful and I feel quite happy. I live in your apartment before one week. I know in your apartment the all things very expensive. Unfortunately, your blow is broke. After shopping when I came your room than firstly, i do bath after that I sleep on bad and my arm hit the blow. When i am aUp and see blow is Tolley broken i feel very sad because it's very expensive. I apologize please understand me and tell me about this blow. How much price? So I buy new blwo for you According to your choice. I hope you will understand me and give me apologize. Yours regards. Abhibrar
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raavi
, I hope you are doing well. I'm writing this letter to you about apologize. You know that I'm living in your
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you are living in Ludhiana for
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very
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beautiful
and I feel quite happy. I
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live
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apartment
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before
one week. I know in your
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apartment
the all things
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very
expensive. Unfortunately, your
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blow
is broke. After shopping when I came your room than
firstly
,
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do bath after that I sleep on
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bad
and my arm hit the
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blow
. When
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and
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very
expensive. I apologize
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understand me and
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. How much price?
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for you According to your choice. I hope you will understand me and give me apologize. Yours regards.
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IELTS essay While your friend was away on vacation you stayed in his apartment. While you were there you dropped on expensive bowl and brok it.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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