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What are advantages or disadvantages of cars?

What are advantages or disadvantages of cars? k53od
In this modern era, Technology is improving day by day. There are different kinds of things, which are affected by technology. But I will discuss about a car vehicle. Hence there are a lot of advantages or disadvantages of cars. To commence with advantages of cars such a good source. Which are invented by scientists. Because our life is becoming easily. In the past, in our country, there were rare private sources foe people. Mostly buses and cabs were available at that time for travelling. But nowadays it is easy to go anywhere. For instance we can go office on proper time. We can visit any place by cars. Secondly because of cars we can save our time. Although, other transportation sorces like buses, cabs, trains are reason of waste of time. Because it stops to any city any town. In addition if we travel by own car, we can continuely drive the car and reach earlier anywhere
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advantages or disadvantages of
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good
source. Which
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by scientists.
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. In the past, in our country, there were rare private sources foe
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people
.
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for travelling.
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nowadays it is easy to go anywhere. For
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time
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Secondly
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cars
we can save our
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. Although, other transportation
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sorces
like buses, cabs, trains are reason of waste of
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time
.
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it
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to any city any town. In
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if we travel by
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car
, we can
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and reach earlier
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IELTS essay What are advantages or disadvantages of cars?

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