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While I agree that the government should assist an individual to showcase their talent because they don't have enough awareness, but it also a fact that there are numerous opportunity available outside in the world. Thus, I believe that in order to grow and be successful in one's career one should be keen enough to utilise such an advantage.

While I agree that the government should assist an individual to showcase their talent because they don't have enough awareness, but it also a fact that there are numerous opportunity available outside in the world. Thus, I believe that in order to grow and be successful in one's career one should be keen enough to utilise such an advantage. 8Qonl

It is a belief that one can attain a good job opportunity simply by graduating from a university. So, it has been proposed that the government should fund the institutes which in return educate the people without any cost. While this undoubtedly benefits the nation, however I think otherwise. I am opposed to this because I think there are lots of other important initiative such as agriculture, infrastructure etc where government has to pay attention.

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good
 job opportunity simply
 by graduating from a university. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, it has been proposed
 that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should fund the institutes which in return educate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 without any cost. While this undoubtedly
 benefits the nation, however
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because
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think
 there are lots of other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 initiative such as agriculture, infrastructure etc where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
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 pay attention. 