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while certain people are in favor of gene-editing, others object to this on moral grounds. discuss both the views and give your opinion

while certain people are in favor of gene-editing, others object to this on moral grounds. discuss both the views and give your opinion 75OPY

Technology has gone so far to intervention in human reproduction. Although a definite amount of people support the idea of genome modifying whereas a plethora of community are against this idea. In my opinion natural birth is the best option rather than artificial still it is a good tool for the barren women. Firstly, Scientists are continuously working on DNA mutations. Since doctor has started to experiment on human embryos, there have been increment in the disease free child birth. For instance, The women who were not able to conceive a baby can use this technique to have a pleasure of being a mother so that artificial birth has taken a essential part in the life of sterile lady. Nature is less an engineer then a tinkerer. As in this modern era people are taking the benefits of technology due to that Researchers have got courage to interfere in the life of human. Secondly, Several persons are not in the favor of human involvement in the natural process of delivery of a child. Religion is one obvious moral compass that people use to confront this kind of questions, though perspective can vary widely. Mankind gives a knee jerk reaction for the test tube baby even they do not understand the situation of a married girl. Humankind have sloppy thoughts related to trail of having a unnatural kid because according to them this the tampering with nature. They also have fear of having a disabled child through this process To put in a nutshell, I would like to say that both the conception are important in human beings life. Scientist must be limited in the inference of human reproduction but where technology provide happiness to individuals there they can enjoy this examination.

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 where technology provide happiness to individuals there they can enjoy this examination. 