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Some people say that better to learn a language for students in small casses while other say that children are better learn to language in bigger classes.

Some people say that better to learn a language for students in small casses while other say that children are better learn to language in bigger classes. Q2rRb
It is often argue that, some masses opine that it is better to learn a language for students in small classes. While other says that children can better learn to language in bigger classes. In this essay, I will discuss both view and analysis my prospective in conclusion. On the one hand, small size of classes have a host of benefits. To elaborate it, teacher as show a more intention toward the student. If size of class is too much small. Pupils normally seen the smaller classes have more discipline rather than other kinds of classes. Moreover, In smaller classes tutor makes a more attention to weaker learners and then they could better perform in examination task. For example, one well _ known newspaper headline is that wealthiest individuals of more countries show the level of class then they pick up of her juveniles. As a result, even the bigger classes trainer is not focus to each student related to study. They were only motive to attend a class and learn the lesson for learners. On the other hand, there are so many reasons why some of human favour with bigger classes. To explain it, when kindles learn a language from bigger kind of group. They boasted a confidence level and easy talk with a larger group. Furthermore, they were also know about who to do the team work and cooperate with each other. In fact, one day of a week organized a activities and exhibition with school staff and all student compulsory to participate that competition and debate a any topic related to course. For instance, one survey is conducted by the authority in kerala. Youth is do better and achievement a goal to learn a language from bigger classes with the experience mentor. In whole a world this nation is a peak level for teach a better language with toddlers. In conclusion, I believe that learning a language class to be effective neither be too big, nor too small.
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a more intention toward the
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.
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perform in examination task.
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show
the level of
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then they pick up of her juveniles.
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with the experience mentor. In whole a world this nation is a peak level for teach a
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with toddlers.
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to be effective neither be too
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IELTS essay Some people say that better to learn a language for students in small casses while other say that children are better learn to language in bigger classes.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
331 words
5.5
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