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Which media should be read

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suroundings
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a precise and true awareness of its content
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help
us
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make
better decision. A controversial question
is aroused
which types of media should
be read
? A number of
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people
prefer to study
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ones
having similar
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views
with our
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ideas
.
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however
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thinks
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that-oppositeistrueasfaraslam
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latter-opmion
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will


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elaborate
on my reason in the -following paragraphs.
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f


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begin
with, the
first
and foremost reason that l will put forward is that the reading

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information
with
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different
perspectives
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helps
correctly
understand facts. As all know, nowadays, public thoughts have a considerable effect on the supporting a political, economic or social issues.
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Hence
it is-reasonable that political parties
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and


others social bonds are
continuously
attempting -to
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change
others
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’
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view
in the line of

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their
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own
interests.
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by
the way, they
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use
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different-
communicating and non-

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communicating
tools including newspaper and i TV news to
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meet
their goals. They
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sometimes
extremely
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wrong
activities
are appeared
as right. Under this circumstance,
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studding


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and
comparing media -to each
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other
pave route to understand what
really
happened.

Another noteworthy point that I will consider is that studding
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different
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views
assists to extend our knowledge. It is a dispensable
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fact
that various
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people
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see
an
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event
through diverse lens due to the
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fact
that they have various background and fields.

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knowing how
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people
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analyses
a special
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events
,
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help
identify weakness and

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powerful
and- boost-
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analyzing
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skill
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enable to
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competitions
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employable
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social problems • with
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economic
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critic the •
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government
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do not perform affordability'
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judge
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in
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people
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IELTS essay Which media should be read

Essay
  American English
18 paragraphs
369 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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