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In your opinion, what is the best way to choose a marriage partner? Use specific reasons and examples why you think this approach is best.

In your opinion, what is the best way to choose a marriage partner? Use specific reasons and examples why you think this approach is best. aVKjX
Most people have only one marriage. It is argued that what factors are most important in choosing a marriage partner. Personally, the ability to raise and feed their family after matrimony is the first priority to choose marriage parents. This essay will explain more with reasons to support. To start with, finances and job are the most important factors which couples need to focus on above other factors. Couples should have a salary that is enough for feeding their family, and they must have savings which might be used in accidents or unexpected situations such as COVID - 19 epidemic. Since money can be used to buy four important factors of living, including food, habitat, medicine, and cloth, money is the factor that couples cannot ignore. This means that certain financials and jobs of a wedding couple are paramount to the family life after marriage. Next, wedding couples should have fundamental factors which are the most important constituent of living. Before couples make a decision to choose a marriage partner, they should prepare themselves carefully and check the status of the partner. They could know whether their parents are ready or not if not they can change their mind. Since the basic factor of living is the factor that everyone must have and be able to have, both couples should decide their partner by following these factors. whose parents do not have ability and power to get these factors are the people who are not ready for marriage. In conclusion, whether couples have the ability and power to raise their family is the best reason for choosing a marriage partner. As people who have certain finances and fundamental factors of living can feed their family effectively and could lower the load of a partner's finances, Couples become happy with their life after marriage
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parents. This essay will
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with, finances and job are the most
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need to focus on above other
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life after marriage.

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, wedding
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, they should prepare themselves
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. They could know whether their parents are ready or not if not they can
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their mind. Since the basic
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In conclusion
, whether
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have the ability and power to raise their
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is the best reason for choosing a
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marriage
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can feed their
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effectively
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become happy with their life after
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marriage
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IELTS essay In your opinion, what is the best way to choose a marriage partner? Use specific reasons and examples why you think this approach is best.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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