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Which kind of music do you like most?

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I’m really excited about listening to music. To be honest, I often listen to famous or new songs with various genres of music, as long as I like its melody. However, I prefer listening to pop music, especially K-pop music, and sometimes I like US-UK blue music. To be honest, I don't know the meaning of lyric songs clearly, but thanks to the vibrant, catchy tunes that make me feel like I have a new source of energy. When I feel bored, listening to blue songs' melodious melody helps me relax. It is obvious that listening to music makes me feel happier. That’s so great.
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really
excited about listening to
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. To be honest, I
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listen to
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famous
or new songs with various genres of
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music
, as long as I like its melody.
However
, I prefer listening to pop
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music
,
especially
K-pop
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music
, and
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sometimes
I like US-UK blue
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music
. To be honest, I don't know the meaning of lyric songs
clearly
,
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but
thanks to the vibrant, catchy tunes that
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make
me feel like I have a new source of energy. When I feel bored, listening to blue songs' melodious melody
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helps
me relax. It is obvious that listening to
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music
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makes
me feel happier. That’s
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so
great.

IELTS essay Which kind of music do you like most?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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