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One of the most listening places I have ever come to Da Lat city

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One of the most listening places I have ever come to Da Lat city. Located in Lam Dong. This place attracts hordes of tourists every year to come and enjoy the town in Da Lat. I went to DL about 5 years ago with my family, at that time I never thought I could have a wonderful experience here. DL is really a holiday destination for everyone who loves the natural landscape and the atmosphere. I visited DL because I was craving for sampling the local dishes there. The weather was a factor that made me love this place much. I believed the cool weather of DL would dispel the heat of summer. I really enjoy my time in DL. It was a kind experience. If I have enough money and space-time I will gladly have another trip back to this city something new.
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Lat. I went to DL about 5 years ago with my family, at that time I never
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thought
I could have a wonderful experience here. DL is
really
a holiday destination for everyone who
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loves
the natural landscape and the atmosphere. I visited DL
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because
I was craving for sampling the local dishes there. The weather was a factor that made me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
this place much. I believed the cool weather of DL would dispel the heat of summer. I
really
enjoy my time in DL. It was a kind experience. If I have
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enough
money and space-time I will
gladly
have another trip back to this city something new.
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IELTS essay One of the most listening places I have ever come to Da Lat city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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