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Which do you prefer? a job with high salary but few holidays or a job with adequate holidays but low salary.

Which do you prefer? a job with high salary but few holidays or a job with adequate holidays but low salary. kYLAW
Money has never appealed to me. I always regard money as something that you obtain at the cost of your arduous sweat. However, money itself doesn't bring you any sense of content. Therefore, I incline to a job with low salary as long as it offers me adequate holidays. The main reason for my propensity is that health is the price we pay for a job with decent pay. As you can imagine, work today is not as easy as before. It depletes your mental efforts and drains your physical energy simultaneously. The situation could be much more serious if you have no time to relax. Take workaholics for exa. . .
Money has never appealed to me. I always regard money as something that you obtain at the cost of your arduous sweat.
However
, money itself doesn't bring you any sense of content.
Therefore
, I incline to a job with low salary as long as it offers me adequate holidays.

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IELTS essay Which do you prefer? a job with high salary but few holidays or a job with adequate holidays but low salary.

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