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Do you agree or disagree with the statement that we could pursue the economic development regardless of the environmental pollution.

that we could pursue the economic development regardless of the environmental pollution. PVk2w
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that the economic development should be placed prior to the environment problems. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here. The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant to the basic fact that the environment has always played an important part in our daily lives. As is known to all, no one lives alone in the world there must be many other things around us, such as the fresh air, the green trees, the lovely birds and colorful flowers. In spite of that, people still focus on immediat. . .
Some
people
argue as if it is a general truth that the economic development should
be placed
prior to the environment problems.
But
to be frank, I cannot
agree
with them, and I would explore
only
a few primary ones here.

The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant to the basic fact that the environment has always played an
important
part in our daily
lives
. As
is known
to all, no one
lives
alone in the world there
must
be
many
other things around us, such as the fresh air, the green trees, the lovely birds and colorful flowers.
In spite of
that,
people
still
focus on
immediat
.
.
.
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IELTS essay that we could pursue the economic development regardless of the environmental pollution.

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